Haha, the moment when he realized they were there for a photo had me dying of laughter.
But before that, I was utterly enraptured by your prose as always. The opening lines set the scene so perfectly and vividly in my mind.
And your dialogue as always is unique, authentic, and wonderfully showcases the character’s personalities. Absolutely wonderful work as always, my friend!
Your prose is gorgeous, as always. And you've captured the male mindset perfectly. That could have been my husband!
I'm the mum of two boys I get a lot of insight. 😂 Thank you for reading and always supporting my writing with your encouraging comments.
It's always a pleasure, honey.
Haha, the moment when he realized they were there for a photo had me dying of laughter.
But before that, I was utterly enraptured by your prose as always. The opening lines set the scene so perfectly and vividly in my mind.
And your dialogue as always is unique, authentic, and wonderfully showcases the character’s personalities. Absolutely wonderful work as always, my friend!
Beautifully written! I imagine this could how my wife feels when I spend too much time at the computer writing :-)
Sweet.