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forgemenot123's avatar

Hope this isn't the last of your poems and I also wish to see more of different genres like fairies or dragons different categories of fantasy basically

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Next month i'll be telling a fairy tale as a serial in Notes, Each day I'll be using a different style poetry to further the story. ✨🦋

Thomas Cargen's avatar

Fantastic Heather

This is so funny the way he thought, and magically poetic

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

LOL, Aye, he was a sly old goblin with a wicked sense of humor. ✨🦋

Stories Sown With Hope's avatar

The final breath… everyone hanging on. I can just see it. lol!

And the favorite grandson gets lucky. :)

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

i gave grandpa my wicked sense of humor. LOL ✨🦋

Daniel Coates's avatar

Just what I needed to read today. Thank you 🥹

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

thank ye kindly Daniel It warms my heart that my goblins are so well received. ✨🦋

Daniel Coates's avatar

And your Goblins warm my heart! 🥰

Larry Threewitt's avatar

I love Limes for Rick. And a touching ending 😢 too. Especially the X hits the spot.

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

awe, thank ye kindly, im so glad you enjoyed it. ✨🦋

Memphis King's avatar

This is nicely hooked into your other goblin poems. Will you write more goblin poems or does that end with May’s challenge?

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Thank ye Kindly Memphis. I will be writing more goblin poems they were very popular. ✨🦋

Vonnie G. Clemens Jr.'s avatar

I live for these goblin poems - no lie. More, more, more, more, more, more, more.

Nimita Kaul's avatar

This was beautiful and endearing! 🫂💙

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Thank ye kindly! I do enjoy a hopeful ending.

Ridley Dragonheart's avatar

Living this continuation of Brindle!!! So fun and so endearing!!!! Well wrote!!!

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Aye brindle is an endearing little fellow I will probable continue with his tale.

richard zimmer's avatar

Our grandchildren are our greatest treasures

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

I don't have any of those yet but I know my mum is rather fond of hers 😁✨🦋

Thomas Cargen's avatar

Awesome drawing

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Thank ye kindly, Old Bogwort looks like a pirate , I adore him. ✨🦋

Mark Farley’s wandering’s's avatar

Old Brindle departs

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Popped his clogs in style, treasure

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Grandson, map, tell more?

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Great fun, 🙏

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

YAY! i'm so glad you are enjoying my goblin poems, I just decided a week or so ago that i needed a change of pace. ✨🦋

Andrew Baglia ✨⛏️'s avatar

Lovely tale!

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Thank ye kindly I've really enjoyed writing the goblin poems this month they have been a fun shift away from the dark folklore I've been writing. ✨🦋

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Really nicely done. A lovely rhythm to it and tells a great story too.

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

thank ye kindly Gary, ☺️✨🦋

Athena Rois's avatar

Treasure isn't always tangible

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Aye, indeed it is not. ✨🦋

angelofthedrknesss's avatar

Children are truly our treasures

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Aye, I do treasure mine own for sure.