Poem: He tore through the canvas in rage, white gloves ripped open and bleeding, Rainwater poured through the age stained cloth, torrents endlessly feeding,
i really like Mariette and Curio but i have not decided what to do with them. I have dozens of lovely characters to play with now. thanks so much for reading my work. ✨🦋
And smoked like a chimney… 😂 At some point it became a running joke, and then I just kept adding cigarettes everywhere. I swear, at one point a character lit one, said three lines, and put it out again like it was a stage prop.
I have quite a bit of cleaning up to do in that mini series. 😄
I love Curio, he’s an amazing magical being and tied to the carnival. Mariette is a well developed character too I just don’t know if their story is to be together or if she is the catalyst for his sad back story.
I put together a few different poetic elements to create this, I’m not sure it’s a literary work of genius or anything but it did what i wanted for the character. ✨🦋
I had to play around with a few different styles before I settled on this Mixture that could manage to be both painfully sad and sorrowfully angry at the same time. ✨🦋
Beautiful and tragic all in a nice burrito!!! Well played!!!
Thank ye Kindly for reading and supporting my work with likes and comments. ✨🦋
I developed Curio this week, and I really like the character. ✨🦋
Heart rendering …
I hope Curio returns and we can discover more …
Great characters, stories beautifully told 🙏
i really like Mariette and Curio but i have not decided what to do with them. I have dozens of lovely characters to play with now. thanks so much for reading my work. ✨🦋
Must not forget your Private Investigator who’s probably investigating crimes as I write on rain sodden streets …
And smoked like a chimney… 😂 At some point it became a running joke, and then I just kept adding cigarettes everywhere. I swear, at one point a character lit one, said three lines, and put it out again like it was a stage prop.
I have quite a bit of cleaning up to do in that mini series. 😄
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I thought I commented on this but I guess I didn't 😅
I really loved this piece, even though it hurt my heart.
I love Curio, he’s an amazing magical being and tied to the carnival. Mariette is a well developed character too I just don’t know if their story is to be together or if she is the catalyst for his sad back story.
I don't think I've ever read a poem like this before.
I put together a few different poetic elements to create this, I’m not sure it’s a literary work of genius or anything but it did what i wanted for the character. ✨🦋
Awesome!!
Thank ye kindly, I appreciate you reading and commenting as always.✨🦋
Fantastic. I loved that.
I had to play around with a few different styles before I settled on this Mixture that could manage to be both painfully sad and sorrowfully angry at the same time. ✨🦋
Spectacular!
Thanks for reading, I played with poetry styles for this one, I used 3 different techniques trying to get that sad hurt anger cadence in there. ✨🦋
There’s no mistaking there’s clearly intentioned, focused well-wrought craft throughout!
Thank you
Oh, Curio... I'll come hang with you, dude.
That ungrateful bitch... 😏
right, all she had to do was live at the carnival I mean who wouldn’t want to live at an old run down carnival
Exactly! 🙃